Thursday, 24 September 2015

                          The Hill


Bbaaaaaaahhhhhhpppp, My irresistible 85 dirt bike fraught with energy as I accelerated up the dangerous track.


My grippy tires spin rapidly I seek a slippery rock in my path, WHACK I hit the smooth rock and ride right over it while wobbling frantically. My strong heart beats faster and faster my brain starts to spin. I turn the muddy corner at the same time I hit power bane in my head I am screaming arh!
 
I spy the open gate, I can smell my own relief. I creep up to the attractive gate.


Noticing, the big noise I depart to dad and he wanted to see me do it again I bravely answer with ok although in my head I am crying no no. I carefully putter down to the bottom and get ready to do it again dad gets into position.


3 comments:

  1. Keryn: Very descriptive writing I could imagine myself there. Well done Jay

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  2. Keryn: Very descriptive writing I could imagine myself there. Well done Jay

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  3. Jay that was great writing. I felt very anxious whilst reading it as you described your feelings so well. Keep up the good work. Cheers nan

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